CPGO: Step 2 – Research List & Setup

I have my idea written down. Time for step 2. This is where the books start to diverge. However I think this is the perfect time to start a research list and gather things I might need.

In ywriter, I click on Project notes and create a research note. I note anything I think I might need to research. Actual research will come later and I’ll probably add to it as I think of other things.

Some of the books such as Smith, suggest doing things like creating a fake cover, a sound track, magazine pictures anything to inspire. I don’t seek these things out on purpose. If I find them I take note, but this is not what I mean by setup.

I already have my yWriter file started. I need a new POV time-line sheet. For this I use Excel. What else? Depending on what I’m writing, I create entries in my little note software for world building.

This is a completely optional step. You may not really need research and maybe your setup is opening Word. This is just how I do it.

Let’s look at our writing tips!

NaNo Card 2: It’s rough for a reason
Problem 2: Not finishing

Whether its perfection or time getting in your way the object it write and finish it! Set yourself some goals and deadlines. Everyone of these books tells you to do that. Next, stick to them.

A Crazy Person’s Guide to Outlining: Step One-The Idea

Time to do another outline. I feel like I must be a schizophrenic outliner. I have a bunch of books on the subject, I tend to pick and choose through them, and I edit the outline as I go. When I first discovered that I wasn’t a “pantser” I found my characters went left, a lot. That led to maps and that, eventually led to outlines.

So yeah, outline. Excuse the dust while I figure all this crap out. I figure if I do it in public I’ll actually get my process down. I’m sure most of you will laugh at me, but I’m used to it.

And books. Here are the books that, over the years, I’ve gleaned pieces and parts from. I’ve not gone through all these books completely. I’m taking time to do that now.

First Draft in 30 Days by Karen S. Wiesner: This is first book I ever got on outlining a novel. It’s badly titled but contains a way of looking at outlining that I had never scene before. It gave me several tools that I really rely on now.

No Plot No Problem Novel-Writing Kit by Chris Baty: In some circles the book is considered the pantser’s bible. I cheated and just got the kit…which I find inspirational every November. Not sure how well it worked into outlining. I’m relying on the daily cards for this, the other items (cheer-leading and inspiration for NaNo) I’m not going to worry about.

Writer’s Digest Writing Kit Okay this is full of idea cards and mini markets and tips. I got it for a birthday a few years ago…it’s still sealed. Seems to be aimed at beginners. Inside are cards with basic writing tips and definitions, an idea deck, a market list and writing tips. I’m going to use the writing tips and ignore the rest for this exercise.

You Can Write A Novel Kit by James V. Smith: I loved Smith’s Writer’s Little Helper, as it was just that, a tiny book with a ton of help. And this has forms too. I like forms.

Book in a Month by Victoria Lynn Schmidt: This book advocates writing while outlining. Which drives me nuts. But it has forms…and I am a form sucker.

From First Draft to Finished Novel by Karen S. Wiesner: I’ve skimmed this book so not sure how much I’ll use.

Sundry Items: There are various tips, worksheets and such I’ve collected over the years. I’ll be referring to these as well from time to time.

So anyway on to Day One, Step One! Oh wait, you want to know why?

I started Without Honor in 2001, just after September. Not only was the world as we know it imploding but my life imploded as well. That’s nearly nine years. I have plenty of partial manuscripts around…why did my first novel take that long to complete?

I had no idea what I was doing. A creative writing degree doesn’t deal with novel composition at all. Okay it may now, but back then it sure didn’t. This was odd, considering how many novels we had to read. (I had fifty to ready for one class that fall of 2001…they were YA novels but still that’s not including the rest of my course load).

Without Honor started as a hokey dream that basically played out like a title sequence of my friends dressed in renfair garb playing up to the camera while they played up to the camera and theme music.

Yes, my dreams are weird. Back on topic:

I started a short story, decided I had a novel. I think I wrote three scenes…and then didn’t touch it until December 2002, after my first NaNo and had 16,000 words towards a sequel that would become two chapters of WH.

My life was crazy. I was writing every day but most of it was non-fic and helped me do things like provided food for my daughter. Now I have this finished thing except for a final sweeping revision…and I really like it.

I want to do that again, in a much smaller span of time.

Technically, Between Kingdoms already has an outline. However, I haven’t looked at it for a long time. The one written scene was written nearly six years ago. Let’s start fresh and get this down and ready.

Step One: The Idea

Everything starts with the glimmer of an idea. Ideas come from anywhere, a phrase, a joke, a mention, a dream, real life, fiction, anywhere.

I’ve heard a few would be authors’ claim they have so many ideas and can’t pick one. Write them down, pick one, work on it, finish it and then go onto the next. How is that hard…well I’ll get to that.

The current project came to me in a dream. A long narrative dream which I still remember vividly. I kept it in my head for a long time thing about it. Percolating as several authors call it. Now to get it in a novel I have to define it. So let’s start this outline.

1. Get an Idea
Got one? Good. No? Wiesner suggests brainstorming, reading, etc. Schimidt has a questionnaire about likes and dislikes to help you come up with an idea. Write that idea down. If notes, pictures and such come while your formulating…stick them all together. Smith suggests a salable idea. Then he states know one knows what that is until they see it. So make sure the idea is something you love and are willing to research and devote time too. If not. Drop it.

2. Write the Idea Down
Describe the idea in one sentence. Schmidt calls this the pitch. Smith calls this the nugget and includes title as well as small paragraph. Starting with a sentence you have the idea condensed from the start. It saves later condensing, and can be rewritten if the central idea changes later. I open yWriter, start a new project. Open the project settings and fill out the project description. Title, one sentence, followed by a paragraph.

3. Idea and Reality
Smith has a test for checking your idea. It’s like a Cosmo quiz that start’s “How do you rate?”. He also lists some Cardinal Rules that boil down to don’t be boring. This is similar to Richard Peck’s 10 Questions ask about your Novel. I don’t write these down but ask myself these questions about my idea.

And that’s step one. Now for inspiration!

NaNoWriMo Card 1: Just Write
Problem One: Not Writing

You know why not everyone who has an idea writes a novel? Because they don’t write.

Visits to the Vampire and Fantasy Worlds

Just got done with my local vampire. We’ll see if my thyroid needs more medcation. But otherwise it looks like flexerol will be my drug of choice for fibro.

Did I tell you that I got an hp tmt2? Convertable touch tablet pc with a wacom digtitzer! With windows 7 and painter it is heaven. I’m completely enjoying it for writing and painting.

I’m nearing the end of WH. The last chapter is taking time to refine then I will have to go through revise. I can’t wait to be done with it but I finally have the writing life I want so I suspect other novels will go faster. At least I hope so.

I have my current short story out to the next market. And I’m still revising my flash piece. Go me.

Happy Thoughts in a Storm

So we’ve had this wonderful rainstorm all day. Now it has turned to snow, and we were just getting flowers too.

My office is an office now. I still have filing and stuff to put away. Blargh. It’s much better though.

Other than that I have one chapter left on my novel. ONE. And I will have a full manuscript which means time to edit. Just got to hunker down. Painting should recommence shortly as my painting area is set up. I primed a few minis yesterday but ran out of primer. I need to get some…maybe I’ll make it to Total Escape this weekend. I want to have the mini for our Warhammer RPG game finished. Wish me luck.

So I’m going to get some cleaning done. I’ve had a lot of web sites to do lately…so maybe I’ll finish putting up porfolio images.

What to do about Flash Fiction

I have a piece that I just finished editing. It’s 900 words so flash fiction. I’ve written a lot of it in the past but never bothered to publish or try to publish. I mean my only real exposure to flash is Reader’s Digest. So the sci fi or fantasy flash that fills my journals doesn’t really cut that market.

But this piece I’m a little enamored with. I like it, I like the potential it presents. I would like to see it in print. Well if I could.

So new area for me. Time to see what’s out there.

Divorcing Yourself From Your Characters

Well now, this is tricky.

You’ve had something horrible happen to you…or maybe something great. And you’ve decided to turn it into a story. You fictionalize it, add some magic, some name changes and bam, you have…

Crap.

You do, you really do. I know this really happened to you but this isn’t you any more. This is a character whose story is based of events in your life. You thought ly darlings were hard to kill…well nothing compares to the bitches that are you. This not only Mary Sue, it’s Super Mary Sue: the Armageddon.

1. Emotional Investment.

The emotional attachment you have to your characters is pretty tight. But when that character is really living your life you can’t bare the thought of parting with those details. A lot of times you’re writing the story to get it out of you, to break that black hole into little pieces and stomp them into dust. So do it, write the whole damn thing out. Don’t stop, edit or add. Just write.

Then put it away.

Not for a month, or six but for a year. You have to remove yourself from the process of bleeding on the page. Why so long? Because this isn’t only your story…it’s you and it can’t be if it’s going to get good.

2. But It’s My Life

No, it’s not. It’s your characters life. You’re going to have to edit the crap of this to answer questions like why aren’t the police involved, why on gods earth did you say yes and similar questions. Don’t rationalize your decisions, if it is a bad one in a story (though it may be great for real life) then toss it out and change it. What begins as a cathartic exercise can either stay that way or become story.

3. Decisions

It was cathartic to get it out…maybe killing the bad guy in the story but…can it really be more than that? Look at it…would you really have read this on your own. Is there really a market for this? Maybe it needs to go back in that drawer. Maybe it’d be best to burn it.

I wrote about one of the most painful periods of my life, when I had no friends to turn to, no one to talk to and my entire life was falling appart. I didn’t embellish, add or fantasize I wrote down the horror in its entirety let it sit. Later when I came back to it (and had critique comments, ugh) I realized the crap for what it was, a way to get all the horrible things out of my being.

Whisper to yourself, but this true, realize that no one cares and go write a good story.

Things I’m Not Doing

Sweeping Epic Gothic! That’s how best to describe Bellefleur by Joyce Carol Oates…a book I’m no longer reading because the prose drowns you.

Drowns I tell you.

I made it one third of the way through the book and couldn’t take it any more. I couldn’t breath, think without despair and I didn’t care about anyone.

Didn’t help the book started with a drowning either.

So that book went to Black & Read…they didn’t want it either. I’m having trouble with the O’s. Besides O’Dell (Island of the Blue Dolphins and Zia) and my current book I’ve dropped Kevin O’Donnell of the brink for his boring, make me do math, Sci Fi snoozer Fire on the Border. Then there was Tawni O’Dell’s murder most foul and unlikable character tome Back Roads. At least I made through Twilight and got many hours of entertainment out of it with making of the fun. These I couldn’t even deal with. It is possible the Edwin O’Connor books might end up on the same pile…but they are at least readable so far.

Also I’m apparently not selling my house. The banks said no at the last minute before closing and the buyer pulled out because she can’t get a conventional loan or pay cash only. Frell…anyone want a house?

I have a ton of other things to do then leak money. Don’t worry, I’d be in this same position had a kept my day job. Worse actually, because I’d be letting down folks other than myself. The room cleansing continues.

We’re not getting a bread maker. The broken one J. bought still sits in the kitchen. He called Cuisinart, who agreed to replace it. Apparently they didn’t say what they’d replace it with. So far we have an espresso maker, and a brick oven (I kid you not) sitting next to the broken bread maker. We give in Cuisinart…we’ll just bake the old fashioned way.

Finally, I am not on schedule. Damn. Kick me now.

Washing the Gods

This morning when I got up I washed all the house and wight alters, set out offerings then got started on work.

Today, I’m officially a writer. I wrote, watched my diet and did some house cleaning. Right now I’m sitting with a Chai writing some more. I got some bookkeeping done and tried to answer the panicked questions from the person who took over my old position.

It was a good day.

Decided to quit and become a writer full time.

Tell work so they have time to hire someone else who I can train. X

Update and re-design my website – Still have widgets to deal with….but almost there.

Put aside a 1 – 2 paycheck buffer so I can pay myself on the same schedule – 1 pay check away!

Update and change insurance – bullocks. Not going to happen. So X

Update business cards

Clean up the “room of no return” and get my office in order: still have four more boxes then I can start moving stuff under the stairs. 20 boxes have translated to 3…maybe 4…oh the junk we keep.


Get a tax savings account

Sell that house – closing in four days

Two things left on my big list. I’ve also started writing for Studio Mom, and I have other stuff to work on. I’m feeling good.

The best in years really. It’s funny how chronically ill just doesn’t seem so bad when you’re living your dream.

Friday Roundup The First

Unfortunately, kidney stones have kept me down this week. So I’m a bit behind. However I wanted to let you know what I’ve been doing around the web. I’ve been a busy girl so read and enjoy!

Over at Examiner.com:
I talk about the upcoming MAGNAcon
I do a recap of the 2009 Spike Video Game Awards and their love of nearly naked women.
I remind you all that Genghiscon is coming up!
And I get all nostalgic over Final Fantasy IX. Come over and tell me your memories of the game!

At Studio Mothers:
I wax poetic about the impending leap of doom I’m taking.

So that’s what I’ve been up to. I’ve nearly got the redesign of this site done. Promise!